Sunday, 7 November 2010

the story openers from Mr. Adrian Tilley by Grandy

I was walking to school today when the impossible happened. Repeat and repeat things happened around me. As I am afraid of being alone. I usually go to school with my friends. However I was late according to my original time that I need to get up. It is not a good news for me because I have never late for school or meeting with my friends. I was in a hurry so quickly dress up school uniform and hold the bread. When I went outside and started to go alone my way, it started raining. Unfortunately, I forgot to bring my umbrella. My umbrella was getting dry at home at that moment. Oh no! I don't have an umbrella to use it. Also my right hand was hurted by the volly ball and bonewone was spread on my hand. It is not allow me to get wet then when I am getting older and older, I will be rheumatoid.
I was scared that I would get wet. At the same time some car passed by. It made my uniform all get wet, just like after bathing. Luckly the weather was better and became shine. The sun was on the sky. It made me feel more comfortable. After a few minutes, it rained again. Before I was getting dry, I also turned wet then. Yes, I had not brought an umbrella. I noticed the view on my side which I have been walked before. It is so strange, maybe it is my hallucination. But it isn't I have do many experience that I often get wet and dry suddenly.
It came very sudden and I could not stay calm and take useful action. I beated my face as prove whether I was dreaming or not. And closed my eyes then though it will change I would wake up. The fact made me disappointed. At that time, it was raining and I was crying. The same feeling consider the weather good or bad. My foot could not move. There wre some car crashed and made me wet again.
Suddenly someone shoted my shoulder and called my name. I opened my eyes and saw my mother with some tears on her face. What happened with me? My mother told me that I had got a high fever. Suddenly my body became very hot or very cold. She sent me to the hospital. I am now sitting on the sickbed. Isn't it a dream?

2 comments:

  1. Ha...nice way to project the feelings of having a fever. I got a little confused in the middle with all the getting wet and then dry ><


    What is "bonewone"?? (Near the end of the first paragraph)

    Note: "volleyball"

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  2. For this word "bonewone", my hand was bruised by the volleyball. And sorry for the unfindable word. And this word I meant that it is one method of traditional Chinese medical. In Chinese it is "跌打". Hope you can understand it.

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